1. How did your color map compare to the published writer's?
My color map had a lot of the same colors and had a decent mix of them on the first page, but on the second page it was dominated by dialogue and action.
2. What seems to be missing in your work?
I am missing a lot of sensory descriptions, like touch and taste and smell. I had a lot of opportunities to add these in my first story in the hamburger place or the hospital.
3. What do you want to include more of?
I want to include more exposition, sensory detail, and backstory- I didn't have any backstory.
4. What do you intend to cut back on?
I need to cut back on dialogue, or at least add more things to my dialogue so it isn't so one dimensional.
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